All Comments on 'Another Place'

by simply_cyn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
poignant memories

Your observations took me back to another time and another place, when I too was left, though I knew not why. Twenty years and two beautiful daughters counted for nothing, she left us all without a backward glance. It was some time before she realised her sense of loss of our teenage girls, I too should hate her but I don't I've moved on to that other place in that other time, be strong be well and be blessed in your new time and place where you will find you need only yourself and your big heart with which to love the world and it will love you back namaste

PaganDykePaganDykeover 16 years ago
Beautiful

Very powerful and moving, very well written. Brought memories of pain and tears to my eyes. Well done.

magicmouth69magicmouth69about 15 years ago
forsake not thyself...

Were I such a man as you've written about, then I'd want you to know he was weak and obsessively pacifist, and past harshness in others confused him when genuine love came his way. Whoever he was must have had more experience in matters of love than I, however, and probably different motives as well. Though I haven't a positive history with another to draw upon, my heart is to your heart. Be well, and hold on as best as you can.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I Feel This Now

I feel this way right now about a man who has left and tossed me aside. It hurts, that I cannot stop thinking about him. It's been months since I've seen him, and weeks since he's texted me. I feel this acutely.

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