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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2207/27/04

both of your poems

have been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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by annaswirls07/27/04

~suggestion

think this would start better with a

here ye!
here ye!

the way you have it makes you sound like a cheerleader
with hairy legs

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by Anonymous07/27/04

your first poem

was funny, acceptable as poking fun at people here who try to be helpful, now you are getting into hatefulness, please expand your repertoire

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by doormouse08/09/04

where's my poem

fuckhead?

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by boxofrocks08/09/04

Hey

I'm first!!

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by LeBroz01/16/07

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Remove those chips from your shoulder at the door.

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by duddle14602/07/07

And other thoughts.

Once stung by the Poet's brush ~ forever bitter.

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by tazz31705/15/12

WHAT HAS PASSED

is still to come forth. TK U MLJ LV NV

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