All Comments on 'Becoming Melissa's Cuckold Pt. 04'

by GreyMatterH

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KidG1000KidG1000almost 7 years ago
really hot

i like how this story is going, its really hot and you are doing a great job with it. i cant wait to read what humiliations are in store for grey. the cucking is going to be so sweet. i hope he has to suck melissa's toes while she fucks a real man.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
super hot!

Love where this is heading!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice!

Interesting developments, I can't wait to see where it goes - keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Baited breath

Awesome story so far. I know a Melissa and I'm reading this thinking about her. Pretty sexy. I can't wait to read what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great Story

I love this. Greta character and story development. I hope Grey ends up her maid (but that's my fantasy), but no matter I can't wait to see how this goes and I hope you keep it going for many more parts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More please

Fantastic story, are we going to see more of this terrific series?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
disgusting

should be listed in interracial.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Terrific story

This terrific story deserves at least one more chapter

hungry4femdomhungry4femdomover 6 years ago
Well written

Well written and hot. The story needs to continue, if just to consummate the cuckold relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story

I'm hoping for another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please don’t leave us hanging

Great development hope you take this story us again

theghostwritertheghostwriteralmost 6 years ago
More please

I have really enjoyed reading this but there must be more ???please????

AndySubAndySubover 5 years ago
This is great!

I hope you get a chance to continue with this, much like the protagonist I'm left wanting more ;-)

cibixcibixover 3 years ago

Each chapter gets better and better. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WHY did you stop writing this? GREAT story - very realistic and super hot. Each episode got better than the last. I hope you'll pick it up and write more!

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