It could have been a bit longer and more detailed. I'm a hard girl to please, but I know this story could have been better. Keep writing.
I'l love to meet you in a dark alley :)
Nice little fantasy there. Very believable characters and the talk between the two was good.
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good story, but...
It could have been a bit longer and more detailed. I'm a hard girl to please, but I know this story could have been better. Keep writing.
GOOD ON YOU
I'l love to meet you in a dark alley :)
very erotic
Nice little fantasy there. Very believable characters and the talk between the two was good.
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