by ManUnited1086
Loved the scene with Liz Gillies, one could almost say she's Victoria with Alex's blue eyes and large breasts. Duncan could date her, lol.
Great read. Can't wait to read what happens with Cole.
About damn time, jk!
Always a good chapter, hoping next one doesn't take long.
Cole definitely seems the path of becoming the new Derek Stamp. It seems like his fears and paranoia are putting him over the edge toward villaindom. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Another great chapter dude. Really interested to see what will happen between Duncan and Cole. I do like Cole, but if he does end up being a bad guy, hope Duncan will kick his ass good bye.
So glad you posted again.
This is One of the best portions you've ever written.... ever
Only thing I Could only ask for is more big boobs
Love love love that you finally added the super sexy and busty Liz Gilles
She's such a vixen and will totally be a wild slut for Duncan
Can't wait for her and Ariana anal scene with maybe a DP
LJ31
I love this series so god damn much. I want to thank you for keeping it going for as long as it has and wish you luck on future chapters.
-LazyNinjas
Just a future chapter idea with Dove Cameron and Elizabeth Gillies giving Ducan a surprise threesome for them both signing with him. just an idea. can't wait for the next chapter.
Lucy Pinder and Kelly Brook would be the ultimate tit wank bitches.
It's really fun reading this story. Every chapter that is posted I get even more interested; though the wait for the next is excruciatingly frustrating, like wanting to see a movie, you know will be good, that's not in theaters, yet.
Idea- Duncan finally confronts Victoria or Alexandra, or both, about the unresolved feeling he has for them.
Despite the joys Duncan has of continuing his escapades with the hottest women in Hollywood, exploring the depth of his feeling for the women he most cares for would make the story have more meaning. Then comes the hot and sexy threesome between Duncan/Victoria/Alexandra! LOL
If not ready for the inevitable conclusion, other hot celebrity women would be...
Dove Cameron
Kendall Jenner
Kylie Jenner
Becky G
Olivia Munn (always enjoyed reading the heat she and Duncan always generated)
Nina Dobrev
Dianna Agron
Hot celebrities:
Emma Roberts
Abigail Breslin
Amanda Seyfried
Cara Delevingne
ChiloƩ Moretz
Sarah Hyland
Hunter King
Doce Cameron
Sabrina Carpenter
Lauren Cohan
Emily Kinney
Kya Scodelario
Kat Dennings
Ha ha I like how the guy below suggested some of the same girls I already suggested. Nice list. I was actually surprised he actually used some of them, but man I really hope you use Dove Cameron. She's hot as fuck and has really cute face lol. Glad to see some people want to see her too. But Sabrina Carpenter, I don't know if I would want her see her just yet. Depending on how far the series go, even though she's 18 she still looks like she's 14. But that depends on manunited. Hope the next chapter come soon.
Thank you all for your suggestions! I am taking many of them in consideration as I go forward. I am working on the next chapter and hope to have it up sometime next week. I really hate keeping you all waiting but I really want these stories to be good and keep you all interested, I'm terribly sorry that it takes me so long. But I will always do my best to make sure they are worth the wait!
Please do Jenna Coleman and Emma Roberts. I would also love more of Jane Levy.
Yeah that's what I figured. Even though it sucks to wait this long, we know it's because your making each chapter as best as you can. Can't wait to read the next one.
Thanks for the understanding. I just submitted it yesterday. So hopefully itll be up in the next day or two
Assuming that he did join the "secret society," it seems like it went straight to Cole's head based on his drastic change in his personality. Well, I can't say that I didn't see something like this coming, but I still think it happened a little sooner than I thought it would. Overall, great chaper!