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Dayaaam!
I like the rhyme, the beat and the intention here. Good job!
very nice!!
again hun, it can be plucked a bit but i loved the message, the flow.
i read it with excitement of what the next words would be.
very nice!
a big grin...
...on my face, after reading this. feverfish, fast fuck-it-all rhythm to this gorgeous rant.
I don't think...
that I could teach you anything you didn't already know -
Your poems beg to be read out loud by girls with soft-chocolate skin and evil tongues.
Nicely done.
sensual, rich, and beautiful
fantastic metaphors, alliteration, playful wording, and soooo sexy - great job
Shut yo mouth!
Girl, all I can say is DAYYUMM! Speak on it!
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