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Jazz, The Way I Know It

bySinsualmind©
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by Anonymous

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by flyguy6907/28/04

Extraordinary promise

from this new poet. Very strong erotica, and i like the colloquial language. The jazz/musical metaphor could have been tighter, IMHO.

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by Syndra Lynn07/28/04

This is wonderful!

Amazing rhythm and sexual tension.

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by BlueskyBeauty07/28/04

well done!

another 1 with spuratic rhyme. i know many here aren't fond of it but this poem danced so sweetly.

lovely poem hun!

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