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Nightly Ritual

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by Syndra Lynn07/28/04

Amen

This feels good! Very relaxing.

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by lostandfounder07/28/04

Nice...

a good poem. Could use a little better flow in my opinion, but it does draw you into the water. Good Work!

Favorite line
"A holy escape"
Could be read two or three different ways, all work great within the poem.

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