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One trick pony.
This just sucks.
Obviously no effort or thought.
Like a dog whimpering to be let out.
Thanks
Answers one of my questions: did anybody ever get a zero around here?
Hmmm
IMHO, I'm not sure it's a poem. Reads like a statement.
Come on now
Feeding off of criticism should have left you with more substance than this.
disregarding the subject...
seriously...
your first efforts were fun and good snappy poetry
this reads like a badly written forum debate post
but with more line breaks
what's your point?
feel better?
nuff said already, i'll save my time for something worth commenting on!
Beezle-squat bubble scat
Hey back off Tara mister, I am trying to draw your fire away from my buds, cant you tell
over here over here little monster,here, here!
I got a mirror here for you on the ground... you can watch yourself take a poo right on it!
No self-flagellation??
What? No self-attacking criticism from Beelzebubbles' anonymous alter-ego on this one? Did you get enough response from others this time that you don't feel the need to play with yourself?
cock sucking loser
comes to mind. but then who'd have it?
~~
Degenerated from fowl bitchin' to just plain boring.
Stirring the pot.
Like stirring up a nest of hornets ~ somebody may get stung.
INFIGHTING WITH WORDS
where both seem unarmed, TK U MLJ LV NV
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