by Ronnie 1946
The story certainly is not politically correct. It was a fun read and I hope all those that do realize that the eroticism comes from putting yourself in the position of the taken one. Therefore I suppose it is harmless good clean fun and I appreciated it. If only I had a way to attract the four studs...hmmmmmmm
Even though the Aussie 'okkerism' was a bit overdone, it was nonetheless a good turn on. Nice to see a familiar town name!
Well done
My boyfriend's Australian so the dialogue was really very hot and clear in my mind.
And it was good. Could use improvement in some descriptions... it seemed rushed. Other than that very hot. And the Australians... oh God Australians... :D
I have been trying to find a good story like this one for weeks. I'm into the whole not too sure you want it at first and then liking it thing. Seems all I could find was either hardcore rape, or D/S stories. Very good and look forward to more like it!