by chaele
Good story, might want to get yourself a proof reader and improve on your written english tho
Interesting concept, and somewhere in here the bones of a decent plot, but this is more like notes to a story than a fully developed one. That's ignoring the absolute careless mess of the spelling and language. (A "winch" as opposed to a witch, seriously? If you don't care, why should we?) And that's not even addressing the issue of exactly why this research scientist would be sending rats with the plague back to Napoleonic times, which is never addressed, or the rather pertinent fact that the Black Death really wasn't going on in France at the time of Napoleon...
A winch is a tool used to haul loads. As in there is a winch on the front of my truck. In the context of the story did you mean wench...as in bar wench or witch as in wicked witch?
Good concept. As others have said get a proof reader.
Good story, but like the others have said, the english need work, and winch should be wench. Also it is too short, you clearly have a good idea, take more time to develop it, i.e. make the story longer.
You should write a story about it.
You haven't yet.
1* is the best I can give a brief outline.