by UkWriterGuy
Next is hubby's turn to fuck multiple of young women (possibly sisters or twins).
Thanks honey for betraying my love for you. For having an affair with another man. For never doing those things to me. For humiliating me in front of others.
I guess from now on, I will always be getting sloppy seconds. I suppose that shows me where I rate in this "marriage."
I did like the sex scenes. They were hot.
Well, you have stirred up the red necks again, keep up the good work.
HE SHOULD HAVE DIVORCED HER AND KICKED HER ASS OUT ON THE STREET WHEN HE HAD A CHANCE. NOW THEY WILL ALL HAVE AIDS AND ALL BURN IN HELL
The AIDS and burn in hell comment is quite odd. If this erotic stories bother you, why are you on Literotica?
The "you can't take care of your wife" comment is equally odd. A) it appears to be a personal attack when the story is most likely fiction and b) the "husband watching wife get serviced" is the genre of the story -- if you don't like the genre, why read it?
Not a bad story, certainly not the most original, but what the heck. I enjoyed it and encourage the author to write more.
Not bad for a short "quickie" with some hot sex scenes. Probably the issue I have with a lot of these stories is that they take a complex issue as the plot but then leave you hanging so to speak or just make it rather unrealistic (aka she's had a lover for 2 months.. thats spiced up her sex life, not his and this turns him on?). Oh well, this is fantasy after all. ;)
He suggests swinging and swapping and she decides upon imposing cuckolding..kidda. He proposes and she disposes. This makes for an interesting marriage where she obviously will impose her will and he best like it.
While the sex scenes in this piece were well done we missed a lot of character development and motivational backgrounds. So reading this was like watching reality TV...vacuous.
I would of love to do this to my ex husband. It has always been my fantasy to have to young men make love to me.
Pretty shitty story...as usual, no loving wife and a wimp husband who will probably be sucking dick and having his nuts removed within a year. Not sure what kind of sick bastard gets off on this shit, there's nothing erotic here and it's a pity I can't sue the author to get my two wasted minutes back.
Two kids smirking at me...and a wife condescending sexually in full view of me, forced to watcg. The Love stopped, maybe aroused and horny but damn well pissed. I would have told the two kids...wait, before you leave, take the whore-slut with you, she doesn't live here any more! Oh, and by the way, you had better hope it takes me a few hours to get out of this chair because...when I do...YOU ARE BOTH DEAD!!!
but I don't get it. She doesn't want to swing but has been having an affair? He loves her for humiliating him? He enjoys sucking other men's cum from her hand? You need a chapter 2 where he ties her up and fucks 2-3 different women in front of her then makes her suck his cum out of his lovers pussies and ass holes. Then they can get a divorce.
certainly not the most puke worthy i've read; i'd have to rank it in the top 50 of degrading and disgusting. to get a better score from me for perversity and fucked-up-ed-ness, you'd have to involve the man being forced to suck cock and take one up the ass. extra points would be awarded for doing so willingly, more points still for being neutered and finding lovers for the wife, and extra bonus for becoming a gay transvestite in bondadge (added chaser of endangering the children.) i figure, if you're going for non-erotic and crappy, why not go for the gold?
Loved the story. The innocent(ish) wife to complete slut. Perfectly written.