All Comments on 'Daddy's Massage'

This part went so fast, it got hot then ended. was this all you had in mind.

I really enjoyed the patience you showed by extending the tease until the father and daughter, and the reader, couldn't take it any longer.

I also liked the lack of any descriptions, so you had to formulate your own images of what Sam and the dad looked like. Personally, I imagined my own father, which made the story even hotter!

Very well written. 5*s for sure!

What a delicious way to give your virginity to someone that loves you.

You need to write more now that she is his. Have him train her in oral, give her oral let her feel his tongue and lips love her pussy and have her take his cum over and over gain!!!

this was paced nicely in that you didn't rush to get to the sex part. You let it slowly build up until it made sense, to a slow burn. Now, a nice follow up is in order, continuing upon the same path, developing the characters, their personalities, how they interact with each other, etc. And the way that the sexual attraction cause threm to try to stay apart because of social norms, until they throw caution to the wind. You know the style, but toss in a distractor.

Was really sweet and sultry. Definitely need chapter 2 with more hot wet sex. My pussy loved it!

Always nice when daddy takes his daughter's virginity. Not only makes my cock throb, but makes me wish I had a daughter to sink it into.

I think k it was great until... They said they loved each other. That's the only part that throws me.

Took me back to when my eldest was reaching puberty. It all came flooding back...mmmmm

my dad massages me nightly and then fills me up we've been lovers for 18 yrs now since I was 20 ...and true love it is.

Most writers here are probably very nice people but can't write. At all.

You can. Very well.

This story needs a bit of "polish;" perhaps by develop the budding romantic feelings as the physical progresses. "Dad" seduced his "daughter" in a dishonest way. It feels like he manipulated her but, perhaps, this is what you intended. If, from the very beginning, their budding romantic feeling for each other had been articulated, they would have been "co-conspiretors" in a "romance." I found your piece quite erotic. Brava

Pretty yummy story. I love daddies teaching their babies

PLEASANT AND BELIEVABLE SENUOUS SEXUALITY BUILT UP

TO CLIMAX

VERY WELL WRITTEN,,,,,WONDERFULLY EXCITING, EXCELLENT

ONCE AGAIN,,,KEEP THEM COMING

MARK CFD

Not too fast, very loving and sensual. Please write more !!

Very nice - subtle and gradual - I love it !

Sac balls can't hit the anus and thighs at the same time if from behind. Learn your anatomy

That’s what you got from the story? Anatomy lesson?

Nice, sensual, sexual, loving, 5 stars.

Great story!