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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata07/29/04

what good

submissive poetry should be.
Tender, awe filled, and beyond words.
erotic without being explicit
very nice work
thank you

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by annaswirls07/30/04

thank you

"These curves of my hips,
This round of my bottom,
Are marked like the caves of Chauvet"

Impressive
I enjoyed this top to bottom
everything in between. Thank you for sharing this with us.

~anna (I do not use the thermometer)

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