All Comments on 'An Insomniac's Manifesto'

"the grand glorious ninth,"

Shadows of " A Clockwork Orange" which in itself conjures a wild night

~and the orgy army

of celtic tapdancers,

lapdancers, la dolce vita

la-la land loonies.~

Love this stanza

~Clowns, chaos, corndogs

and crazy carnivals

collide, and in the clash

red noses, novelty hats

and a million twisted ideas

float finally free.`

That, my friend, is genius

I'd have to reprint the whole poem but possibly one of the best things i've seen here.

it has everything

alliteration, vibrant images, great stuttering rhythms, and images to die for.

And it sounds like my kind of party

Excellent work

Thank you

The very thoughts that unceasingly wander through a insomniacs mind. Crazily enough, this also reads like one of my nightmares. Great writing, Liar.

send me an invitation!

this was wonderful fun!

expression ...and phrases were new and fresh....delightful...*blue*

its forceful, and you got some power going on in this poem, it really kicks, good work :)

my favorite lines:

Give me the flash

thunder charged current,

flesh, flirt and flaunt,

blossom, breed exceed

every assumed expectation.

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Iknew I forgot something!!!

A perfect reminder of why I'm a Liar groupie ;)

Dayum

start

finish

and in between

what the fuck are you drinking? everything?

Gettin drunk on excess sleeplessness

Together with a toast from Absolut.

An all out assault on sleeplessness. Another excellent rendering by the Liar.