All Comments on 'I can love you...'

by Lauren Hynde

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CharleyHCharleyHover 19 years ago
You are amazing as always, yet more so . . .

Two poems, this and ?Tongues?, that stand apart from your others, simple in form, to the affecting point, explicit in imagery, speaking different emotional languages from different places on the same breath. On the surface of the words and beneath, both poems seem the most deeply felt I have read from you yet.

This one absolute in its shape: tender, direct, beautiful and poignant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Breathless

how simply put and yet so poignant. thank you, lauren

vella~

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
Sigh!

Sigh is the best I can do, especially after following what Charley wrote.

Few words that speak volumes.

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
Beautiful

I'd say I want to be you when I grow up, but you're younger than me so I've no excuse. ;)

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
If...

you love like you write, you must have a long line of lovers waiting their turn.

ty,bd

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowalmost 18 years ago
Excellent

Small, sharp, deadly good. A pirhannah of a poem. Thanks.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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