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by Anonymous

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by Autolycus07/29/04

so simple but wonderfully constructed

I am probably the only one who is going to comment on the form of this poem but before that sentiment is something near and dear to me and therefore best left to others.

The rhythm moves beautifully and the ringcomposition gives it a wonderful closure. All in all a wonderful poem:)

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by duckiesmut07/29/04

smiles softly....

...loves that, in reading your words, a reader sees your heart...and it's beautiful.

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by Anonymous07/29/04

A look inside...

A great introspective look at a relationship and it's dynamics... Well written.

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by skywriterxxx08/03/04

lovely poem...

MMMMMMMMM, I see we have a somewhat similar poetry style...

This is nice...very nice!

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