All Comments on 'Public Slut Ch. 01'

Good opening, it grabs the readers attention and imagination.

I really enjoyed this. And I am most interested in reading more. I like the way you use words and how you repeat sentence structures.

Awful writing

To the anon who said awful writing. Why even comment? The author has gone out of their way to create something that you get to read for free, if you don't like it then just walk away.

Personally I like the idea of this story, and would be glad to see more. A little more world building might help but I think this is a good start.

Start of starts at maximum volume, but well written. Perhaps you can explain more in chapter 2 and develop why the speaker decided to try to steal chips in such a society?

I think anonymous comments should be allowed.

Keep going! I really think you could take this far.

I was really hoping there was another chapter. You should continue this. I'll check back in a while to see if there's more!

This is such an interesting concept, pleeease writ more!! i can't get enough!

The concept of this story is so hot.

Can't wait for more chapters