All Comments on 'Spin the Bottle'

good combination.. 3 Dommes and a guy!! what fun they could hav ;) will there be more? xxx

Love the idea of several women punishing one man. Also the random element where "anything" might happen. How about a story based on lottery numbers? First number deciding position, second deciding implement etc. Or a really unfair version of strip poker wher the gals pay some trivial forfeit but the guy gets increasingly severe punishments. Maybe a story where one of the dommes is a friend of the wife that the husband can't stand. Should increase the humiliation. Oh, so many ideas. If only I could write....

this is creative and has potential to keep going. i feel it could have been twice as long, and that it could have been more drawn out, but i like it. you get the husband's internal workings brilliantly, though the actual action seems a bit rushed. keep going

could be my ass.