All Comments on 'Dana Comes Out'

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DianeRedfernDianeRedfernalmost 7 years ago
Very compelling

Good start to a first-time story. Very wet and hot beginning. Keep 'em cumming, luv!

soso,

Di

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Mmm nice. Me thinks Dana doth protest too much.

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 7 years ago
A Great Start

Well done! You have really created a great couple of characters, I hope you plan to continue this with at least one further installment. Five Stars

CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 7 years ago

Why do straight guys write lesbian sex stories with anonymous biography info? . This was ok but totally unrealistic. The premise is all wrong. Her ambivalence about her sexuality is plain discordant - it makes no sense. Only a dude would feel this kind of cis gender amiguity. A woman's identity is a whole different set of issues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great start to a story

I would love to read a chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I am excited for the next story.

Every decision begins from a thought. And this story totally made the character Dana unfold her fantasies and desires.

- www.ishared.life/19-crazy-sex-skills

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I write for publication and just post here on my free time. I don't seek out editors and everything here is usually written in under an hour. Writing can become a chore when you're doing it for money. This is just a way to put more enjoyment into a hobby