All Comments on 'Truthfully, He isn't Ethical'

He smiles looking directly at you, looking through you. Knowing you completely from past sessions. All your needs and wants9251

I'm giving you a 5 partly because of where the story is going...

As a first piece I rate this highly,keep up the good work,looking forward to reading more of your stories.

It's a good start with enough interesting characters to go on.

You have many directions to choose. So let your mind take off any go somewhere new. Give us characters who have both good and bad points. It doesn't have to have a happy ending. My story didn't.

And tune out the anonymous-holes who see only their own side and have probably never loved anyone, anywhere