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by Anonymous

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by slavegurl07/31/04

hot

that was hot.. i loved the phrasing and the spacing.. i raced along with the arousal to the orgasmic conclusion.

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by damppanties07/31/04

Smiling

Loved your words, Mat.

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by 07/31/04

Ambrosia

for the eyes. lovely flow and i can see the love so clearly.thank you for sharing that poem, Mat... more please!

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by EmeraldKitten07/31/04

Yummy

Mmmmmmm.... Love it, just like everything else ya write. ;)

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by doormouse08/07/04

Oh wow!!

That was great!!

Very vivid images!! ;-)

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