by Liar
I have always loved trains, and this gorgeous love poem moves like one. Excellent imagery! Very well done!
Cheers,
Lalenya :^)
I have always loved trains, and this gorgeous love poem moves like one. Excellent imagery! Very well done!
Cheers,
Lalenya :^)
I've never felt tired sighs better then the way you use them here. The longing to reach out is palpable. Very good work!
Some poems you can just feel--like this one.
*No longer using the thermometer.
and you can dance to it. Holding hands, dancing, etc. :) I could see a hundred different sequels, which is why you should never write one... Good job Liar.
and rolls down the track in a wonderful tone with great imagery. nicely done liar.