All Comments on 'Hopeless romanticism on a train'

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Lalenya LoveLalenya Loveover 19 years ago
Beautiful Poem!

I have always loved trains, and this gorgeous love poem moves like one. Excellent imagery! Very well done!

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

Lalenya LoveLalenya Loveover 19 years ago
Beautiful Poem!

I have always loved trains, and this gorgeous love poem moves like one. Excellent imagery! Very well done!

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
I like this one...

I've never felt tired sighs better then the way you use them here. The longing to reach out is palpable. Very good work!

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
good stuff

Some poems you can just feel--like this one.

*No longer using the thermometer.

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
awww

very touching..indeed romantic.

enjoyed this!

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
"palm to mind...

for a minor eternity"

Bravo!

The_FoolThe_Foolover 19 years ago
Good Beat

and you can dance to it. Holding hands, dancing, etc. :) I could see a hundred different sequels, which is why you should never write one... Good job Liar.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 19 years ago
excellent rhythm....

and rolls down the track in a wonderful tone with great imagery. nicely done liar.

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