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by jd4george08/03/04

This was a tough read.

The first couple of times I read it, I wasn't sure how I felt. Actually, that's not quite accurate. I knew how it made me feel, but I didn't want to admit it. That was yesterday.

Two of your words kept running through my head throughout the last 24 hours. Realizing your poem was haunting me, I had to come back and comment.

But, should I thank you for the haunting, or curse you?

"innocennce abbreviated" will not leave me soon.

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by LeBroz10/29/06

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A well done depressingly horrid write;
Were you having a bad day?

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by duddle14601/08/07

escape

Living a nightmare ~ hiding behind a sodden security blanket.

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