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by tarablackwood2208/01/04

A nice read

....that I think would benefit by some restructuring and punctuation. It is not the type of free-run ramble that can survive intact without proper pausing.

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by lostandfounder08/01/04

It works....

in my opinion. The lack of breaks in the poem helps carry the feeling of no rest or help that the title and the images imply. Sorry to disagree Miss Blackwood!

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by BlueskyBeauty08/02/04

i liked it!

it's meaning well written. i'll remain neutral as far as structure. lol call me wimp!!

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