It's nice to see that men can feel the same way for a woman the way a woman can feel for a man. Thanks for letting me know that true romantics still exist.
littleluscious
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Anonymous01/15/05
I love this story of yours
I love how much he loves "Her". She is so lucky that she knows it.
Loved the lyrical flow and vivid details of anticipation and ultimate completion.
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Anonymous01/05/06
Very Erotic
Unbelieveable! Very lyrical and erotic. It felt like I could FEEL the words caress and wrap around my body. The more I read the more I wanted. I felt like I had just been ravished! I want more...please.
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Anonymous01/29/06
Beautiful......
I lost myself in your story, feeling your words touch my heart, awed that such a love existed.
English
Very Nice
It's nice to see that men can feel the same way for a woman the way a woman can feel for a man. Thanks for letting me know that true romantics still exist.
littleluscious
I love this story of yours
I love how much he loves "Her". She is so lucky that she knows it.
Very romantic!
Loved the lyrical flow and vivid details of anticipation and ultimate completion.
Very Erotic
Unbelieveable! Very lyrical and erotic. It felt like I could FEEL the words caress and wrap around my body. The more I read the more I wanted. I felt like I had just been ravished! I want more...please.
Beautiful......
I lost myself in your story, feeling your words touch my heart, awed that such a love existed.
Short, sweet....
romantic love story with powerful words setting the scene.
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