by Member389
Thanks for the story. Good to read about a nice guy who meets someone who recognizes and appreciates that in him. Will there be more, I wonder??!
I hope for more chapters, they should have aa full fledged Romance
This was a wonderful start to a great story. Lots of obstacles to overcome to keep everything fresh and interesting. Convincing Jules mother, problems with his ex, lots to explore. I could easily understand why he was afraid of falling in love with her. Thanks for a great story
I really enjoy your work and I hope you can build off of these characters because you have created such a great story line and dynamic between them.
Keep up the excellent writing.
Very nicely written tale. Thanks for sharing a bit of your craft!
You have conjured up a lovely tale with the sensitive ingredients of trust, decorum and passion doled out in varying doses. The end product is immensely pleasing but I wonder why you hide under such an impersonal name?!
Well I read and rated this one before, but didn't comment. I just finished the re-read and if i could give more stars I would. I will say this though, this story deserves more chapters, Jules and Jay have more ....... hope you consider adding to this story....
but it works. My imagination can take it from here. Good story.
It read like just sex, no love. He seemed like a cold bastard. The ending could have been much better