All Comments on 'Precious Jules'

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typewriter11typewriter11almost 7 years ago
Nice

Thanks for the story. Good to read about a nice guy who meets someone who recognizes and appreciates that in him. Will there be more, I wonder??!

richieyeahrichieyeahalmost 7 years ago
Nice story

I hope for more chapters, they should have aa full fledged Romance

HTW2HTW2almost 7 years ago
Please continue this storyline

This was a wonderful start to a great story. Lots of obstacles to overcome to keep everything fresh and interesting. Convincing Jules mother, problems with his ex, lots to explore. I could easily understand why he was afraid of falling in love with her. Thanks for a great story

pip1247pip1247almost 7 years ago
Keep going

I really enjoy your work and I hope you can build off of these characters because you have created such a great story line and dynamic between them.

Keep up the excellent writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice tale!

Very nicely written tale. Thanks for sharing a bit of your craft!

confused9confused9over 6 years ago
Very well written

You have conjured up a lovely tale with the sensitive ingredients of trust, decorum and passion doled out in varying doses. The end product is immensely pleasing but I wonder why you hide under such an impersonal name?!

redbaron172redbaron172over 4 years ago
OUTSTANDING

Well I read and rated this one before, but didn't comment. I just finished the re-read and if i could give more stars I would. I will say this though, this story deserves more chapters, Jules and Jay have more ....... hope you consider adding to this story....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
I was a little surprised at where it ended,

but it works. My imagination can take it from here. Good story.

10sguy10sguyabout 2 years ago
More Please

Pretty please?

rockdoctor63rockdoctor63almost 2 years ago

I would have LOVED to have heard the X wife's reaction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. A little short on the ending.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

It read like just sex, no love. He seemed like a cold bastard. The ending could have been much better

Tarloso2Tarloso27 months ago

Needs a part 2 desperately...

GrubermanGruberman5 months ago

I don't think he was cold, just making the best out of a "hard" situation.

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