All Comments on 'Amante X (Terza Rima)'

It took me a few reads to come to terms with the change in passion and tone here.

I like it, of course, and it gives the charecters depth and earthiness that is needed for a string of poems.

A brave new step, another dimension, and, amazingly, my feeling of catching a woman whom I have always thought as rather vanilla,being greedy and lustful in bed.

That is amazing writing and shows what kind of connection you have with your readers

each Amante poem delights and pulls me in deeper

Thank you

weren't you? huh?

:)

*No longer using the thermometer.

i like the bitch now!

~grinzzz~

lovely poem!

....and the altered tone and content from the others provide a startling backdrop for the beautiful phrasing.

i likes me a hot latina

poetboy824

is not up to par with the others in this series

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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