you write more soon! I am glad you did not choose to have him take her virginity while she was inconscious, and can't wait to see how you continue this tale. It has a pit of potential and I hope you don't leave us waiting too long!
I'm really not into these kinds of stories, but this one blew my mind. I would read a chapter a night and it was more and more incredible each time. Very hot story. I loved it.
The first chapter of this story is scorchingly hot. I can't wait to read more!
What a treasure! Just found this little gem of a wonderful story. Wonderful plot and likeable and believable characters. A fantastic read.
This is just sooooo great ... great work..write more :)
You've made me want to read the next installment.
so far this sounds interesting. im curious to see what will happen. but here the thing that bothers me; feminine armor?? really what is that?? granted she is a women, but really?? not cool.
This is the start of what looks to be a good series.Thanks
sometimes the beginning of a series can be boring or tedious. not this one
So descriptive. I absolutely love this story so far. I can't wait to read the rest!
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