by Mr_Shoggoth
This story has legs. You can expand it in many directions. I look forward to the next chapter.
This is gonna be a an outstanding story! Keep doing what you are doing, & have that idiot Gary on the receiving end of his behavior. Very immersive writing, please continue. 5 *
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Really enjoyed this series. I hope you continue with future chapters.
I liked the idea of doing scientific tests on the orb. One thing I didn't get though is how Violet became so convinced of Izzy's good nature from feeling what was ostensibly Izzy's mind. Couldn't Izzy have implanted those perceptions in Violet without them being Izzy's genuine feelings? Still, the bulk of the evidence does point to Izzy being a good person nonetheless. I liked the funny punishment for Gilbert as well. Keep writing! You're one of the best.
That’s not funny.
My general practitioner is named Dr. Feelsyouup.
(Actually it was a laugh riot. I’d love to see more of the overall story arc, too!)
Thanks for writing this. Hope you continue the story. (And all your stories) Take your time and get it right. Don't know if HHM will be much help now that Chuck's dead.
vividly steamy action + great story telling = can't get enough ;P
Mind altering multi-mega-orgasmic sex with a beneficent, benevolent, near omnipotent entity capable of psychological one-ness with a partner?! Wooo-hooo!
Ima wantme somma THAT!
May we have another, Mr. S!
Thank you, SIR!
Mel
this and the accidental summoning are my favorite stories on the site even ahead of tefler's three square meals and ltpc's endangered series, which i both support on patreon.
while i'm personally not a big fan of the scenes where the male gets penetrated i can ignore them and still enjoy the stories and your storytelling.
please keep on writing you are doing great.
This is so excell not on so many levels, dimensions and perspectives. It’s nice to know that there are minds like yours that produce work like this. I won’t bore you with my personal issues but I will say this. Please keep it up. Take that any way that strokes your boat. You work is just starting to explode for me. It like that, watching a thermonuclear explosion up close at a macro view and from multiple perspectives in super slo mo and luxuriating all the interactions of all the matter and energies involved and finding so many jokes buried in the flux. Dude... Please keep writing. Your work is a relief .... da Shaman....
I laughed when Dr Feelsyouup got a phonecall 19 stories underground in total EM isolation, because he knew it to be totally impossible, right? But a few minutes later his boss makes a call for Karen to be released?
Please continue the story. It is to good to stop, good character development and wonderful writing.