All Comments on 'My First Time'

Very sweet and nice. I liked it.

My god man I have never read such a clinically naive story on Literotica.

Your writing show all the emotion of a donut hole.

Please do everyone a favor and stop contributing

Thank you oldbob68, I'm glad you liked it.

Anonymous user, ask me where I think you should stick your opinion.

Your first sex and your first submission bear parallel elements of everyone's stumbling first time. I think you could have fleshed out the characters and developed the lead up to the sex a bit more. It was sweet though.

Thanks for the feedback nyc1975. It's true that I am not an experienced writer. I'll have to think about what ways I can develop characters more.

No way would he pull out just shot his cum deep up inside her pussy

Thanks for your first post. Keep posting to develop your skills. A realistic account of first time sex, made especially realistic with the description of all the mess and nervousness. I was as nervous as they come on my first time, and so self conscious of my big stiff untidy looking erection, feeling like the stiffest I've ever had, compared with my girl's soft smoothness. First time sex is scary - for the guy as well as the girl.

Very good story. Realistic and genuine, much better than most over the top stories on this site. Good job.

Best erotic story I've read in a long time. It made my eyes a little misty at the end. It was very genuine and beautiful.

Thank you ThePerfumedGarden521. You should write a story. We probably have similar tastes.

cruiser_2015, thank you also. You're right about the scary-ness. It's scary like the top of a drop on a roller coaster. You're questioning the decisions that led to that point, scared by the feelings in your gut, but you know, on a high level especially, that you're happy to be in the situation.

This really captured the romance and tenderness. Every guy should treat girls with such care. Still to have my first time but I hope it happens something like this. Shame you're not still together but hope you have found someone great too.

Lovely story

Have had similar encounters.

Very nice story reminding me of my teen days. Lovely times then.