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by Tathagata08/03/04

I love

the combo words.
Sometimes they come off as cliche but in this poem they are perfect description.
May I say...very sexy poem too
Thank you

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by tarablackwood2208/03/04

your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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by tungtied2u08/03/04

Oh yeah...

It's all about the rhytym, and your phrasing and word combos give this a writhing, driving force. Tasty.

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by lostandfounder08/04/04

I'll admit it....

I don't get this one...maybe I'm reading too deep, maybe not deep enough...still, for some reason I like it. Perhaps the words are stiring something in my unconscious. Nice work..I think.

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