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Me & Her, She & I

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by Tathagata08/03/04

You painted

a wonderful picture, so vivid, so caring, you can feel the bond between you.
Some very clever rhymes, and internal stuff going on.
( caught red handed was great)
and the " street" style doesn't detract from it at all.
It's smart and funny and touching.
You have a lot of potential.
I hope you stick around and show us what you can do.

Thank you

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by tarablackwood2208/03/04

your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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by DeepAsleep08/05/04

Since-you-won't-mind.

I really liked this, the way I seem to like all your poetry, which reminds me of hot days in the city, sometimes - the feel of concrete baking under my ass and the sounds of a thousand people milling about. That's the flavor I take away from your poems.

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