by sensuallystricken
Now this is more like it, still a bit of that weir description style left but otherwise the best so far. The MC found his balls and the lady of his heart accepted it with open arms (or should that be legs?), now I'm already looking forward to them coming out as a couple to the parents and lots and lots of love making in the future.
5+++++
Thank you for the sweet and touching story about young love.
while the relationship seems a bit far fetched, i love the glow of discovery you've captured... may we have some more, please
Not all of us are breeders. This was a great story of young love. I'd like one more about their life in college. Perhaps involving a threesome before marriage.
Did Trump write that mentally deficient comment about "afro breeders"? I come to this site to read sex stories, not to read poorly written and mindblowingly racist comments. Please kill yourself next time even an inkling of a thought to comment something like that on any site again forms in your incest-bred brain. Thanks for killimg my buzz. Dumbfuck.
The schmaltz in this story is not cloying and that (in my opinion) is its best facet. The subtle hints of romance blossoming between them did not ruin this climactic chapter at all! I love that the uncertainties of their relationship were addressed, and I ABSOLUTELY LOVED how sweet and genuine they are around each other. It's incredibly heartfelt for a story in Literotica-- a website I supposed would harbor only the most sensual of literatures. Well done, author!
Glad you made them both virgins.
Lovely plot.
I am looking forward to the adventure .