Great story Nice job with scene setting and character development. p.s. I love the smell of honeysuckle. LOL
i really liked that. life in the wild and sex in the wild. that was extremely great description and amazing characters.
Cute as a passle o' baby possums! Giggle! This is an engaging story of "mountain love", well-written and charming.
THIS IS A REAL CUTE STORY,,,THIS IS A CLASSIC LOVE STORY!
A nice plot, different. Great descriptions of Lillie and Billy, the environment, the weather, the scents, the sounds, the sights, and the sex. A good example of showing and not telling.
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Loved it
Great story
Nice job with scene setting and character development.
p.s. I love the smell of honeysuckle. LOL
cool
i really liked that. life in the wild and sex in the wild. that was extremely great description and amazing characters.
Cute!
Cute as a passle o' baby possums! Giggle! This is an engaging story of "mountain love", well-written and charming.
THIS A REAL CUTE ONE!
THIS IS A REAL CUTE STORY,,,THIS IS A CLASSIC LOVE STORY!
Mountains of love
A nice plot, different. Great descriptions of Lillie and Billy, the environment, the weather, the scents, the sounds, the sights, and the sex. A good example of showing and not telling.
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