Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'The Trade Show Pt. 01: Exposed'

by GeorgiaD

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 6 Comments
addyftwaddyftwalmost 7 years ago
A good start.

Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What is the point of this

Not a story nor is it a chapter. It's barely a fragment.

darceyballerinadarceyballerinaalmost 7 years ago
A nice start

A taste of more to come hopefully? Nicely written, was the trade fair at the Royal Cornwall Showground btw? :)

GeorgiaDGeorgiaDalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Trade Show

Hi, yes it was in Wadebridge. G xx

BambiBimbetteBambiBimbettealmost 7 years ago
Beginning

A slow build is a nice change of pace. Beginning slowly and not rushing to the sex, if there is any, is the art of the tease and can make for a better story. Going to the next installment now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I agree with Anonymous "what is the point of this"

A good start that went nowhere. Such a shame because you obviously can write and the structure is good. Keep writing and give us more.

Best wishes

LindaCrystal x

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userGeorgiaD@GeorgiaD
23 Stories
127 Followers
UK TGirl embracing a life in-between genders. Looking for friends, lovers (TGirl or female would be lovely) and especially someone to chat with. Happy to exchange mails.

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

The Trade Show Pt. 02 Next Part
The Trade Show Series Info