by bone251
There are other animals that offer better (or at least different) similes.
Cows in the last one, elephants in this one. It doesn't help and it's distracting.
Sweet story! Nice girls. I could see them and put myself in the story. I do like the humor thing. makes it more real.
Not quite the same as a kite dancing in a hurricane, Mister Bond.
But a good little quartet all the same. Nice work.