All Comments on 'The Muse is a Goddess Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What's with the elephants?

There are other animals that offer better (or at least different) similes.

TheMoonIsLikeTheMoonTheMoonIsLikeTheMoonalmost 7 years ago
Seriously just stop with the animals

Cows in the last one, elephants in this one. It doesn't help and it's distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hot Hot Hot

Sweet story! Nice girls. I could see them and put myself in the story. I do like the humor thing. makes it more real.

ElectricBlueElectricBluealmost 7 years ago
Elephants dancing?

Not quite the same as a kite dancing in a hurricane, Mister Bond.

But a good little quartet all the same. Nice work.

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