by LucindaPaige
I hope you publish this book and wonder if there are other books in this vein.
Heartache is like a train entering a tunnel. At first, it seems so far away, and it can be ignored. You can even pretend it isn't there, but sooner than later, it is barreling towards you and you can't escape from it anymore. Jimmy really loves his daughter, and Rae is cheating on him. Maybe he is cheating too, but that doesn't excuse hER sleeping with Killian. I like the two of them together, but so far, Rae is willing to do anything for her daughter, but how will the inevitable divorce work for her daughter when Jimmy finds out what is really going on and all he'll breaks loose? This story is super interesting.
Great writing. I did not realize this was going to be a 50 shades story though. Silly me. I'm done
I stumbled upon your story tonight and I have to say I absolutely love it. I love the chemistry and the details between the characters. I usually don't comment, but you have an amazing way with words and I can tell you put a lot of thought into your work. I read your bibliography to see when your next chapter would be out. I'm so sorry to hear what you're going through, I really and truly hope that you're doing okay and that you are getting better. Please keep us updated.
I'd also love to read your other work on the other site, perhaps you could share a link to it?
Best wishes,
Cookie
Can’t stop reading. Beautiful plot and character development, not to mention the really hot scenes!