by eroticwriter00
Dad should have been more understanding and tender. He treated his daughter without respect. I hope Chapter 3 reflects the love that Chapter 1 did.
So it's been over a year...where is part 3? I usually don't read stories until all the parts are posted because I hate when this happens!!! You get built up to the characters and then get left hanging without an ending. You may end up on my list of writers never to read again just for NOT finishing a story.
She deserves much better than him. He rejected her. She needs to find another daddy and have her father watch as he makes her his.
Okay, this must have been writen by a guy.
Having a doctor's fingers in you is not comfortable. At all. No woman wants it, it sucks. Forceps hurt. There is no way around that. It's a plastic, or metal, object with sharp edges. Very cold, and slowly opens you up after it goes in. It's very not comfortable.
I get this is just a story, but it really loses any female readers there.
Look not wanting to sound like an ass BUT you are a tease for leaving everyone hanging