All Comments on 'My Mom is a Hot Mom Ch. 05'

Awesome!! I like the pace the series is taking. You read so many stories on this site where the son gets horny and 15 minutes later he's fucking his centerfold hot mom. These characters are being a little more sexual each chapter but they're not rushing it. Can't wait for chapter six!

The shaving scene was so erotic. Any plans to include more people or have the mom get a tattoo or haircut.

I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

This chapter of your story is hotter then the last and it was on fire .Love the pace of this story and can't wait for the next chapter . How far will this go and how much hotter will it get ? Great Read Thanks !

Outstanding. Can't wait for more!

Exhibitionism, shaving:)... Outstanding!

Really enjoying this story. More please, can't wait.

I liked the buildup of the last stories, they were very erotic. However, when the Mom capitulates to the son in a very rushed and hurried manner, it loses the sexual tension, the teasing, the slow build went 0 to 60. Still liked it though!

Slow down the action, a little more reluctance on the moms part please!

She had me at a young 16, I never knew her donor. She was a babe and I didn't need my friends opinions to know it. Now maybe we're just a precocious clan but your Randy character reminds me of myself at 13, didn't take long to grow out of that. I understand you need to work within the age guidelines but seems like you could come up with a different device to explain his retarded social maturity (possibly his early life spent comatose). But other than your apparent limited grasp of the language I would suggest you reread your work prior to submission or enlist the services of a quality writer (several at this site) to proof for misspellings and such. Overall though enjoyed the story, took me home albeit many years ago.

This is turning out to be one of my favorite stories. Just a touch more reluctance on the Moms part would be nice. Let it all still happen, just make her a little bit more demure.

Great buildup and anticipation. I disagree with slowing down the pace at this point. I don't think it would make sense. I personally think the buildup is perfect!! Great writing!

great story but,should have ended with them in bed and mom finally giving in to her son!!

Thank you to everyone for the comments. As always, I welcome and appreciate comments, whether they are positive or critical (although if you give criticism, please try to make it constructive!).

As far as the pace is concerned, I'm not going to give anything away, except to say that I have planned all along for this to be an 8-chapter series, so you can infer whatever you wish from that about the probable pace and series of events, and the interactions between the two main characters, as things move forward to the last chapter. This will not be an open-ended, indefinite series. I think -- and I hope -- that readers will be pleased with the ending. Thanks, again!

I love this series and hope you will allow Randy and his Mom to make love to each other soon. I was surprised that his Mom had been such an exhibitionist. She seemed so demure and classy. Her husband was a real ass. He turned lose a monster and then was not man enough to handle what he created.

The difficult story line deals with long term relationships. Will Randy and his Mom continue to live together as almost husband and wife or 1) will she find a man near her age and remarry, She could tell her new husband that the relationship with Randy needed to continue. 2) Will Randy find a woman that reminds him of his Mother and marry her. He then tells his new wife to be about his Mom and they become a threesome.

Great characters. Looking forward to the next 3 chapters

Amazing story AMAZING.

The scene on the island was soooo hot. Randy actually got to fuck his mom's breasts and cum on her! Not only that she actually put his cum in her mouth and taste her own son's ejaculate, so sweet! The shower scene was a bonus too. That's why we older women love younger guys, they can still perform even after they have already cum for you again and again. I am still quivering after reading this chapter!r

That was so nice and next time who knows where the cum will land. I sure can't wait. Great sexy story.

I keep logging on here only for the new chapters man :(

Can't wait for next installment great work

A mother's pussy should always be hairy and mysterious. I love my own Mom's full, dense pussy mane.

What a great story, congratulations!

Can't wait to start reading new chapter.

new chapter release date ?

Plz continue with many more chapters. One of my favorite

Really enjoying this series. I hope you continue this. It has been a little of two weeks and we want more!!

I hope there's more to this story. It's starting to get interesting.

Unless your a child who's gotten in trouble for writing pornography, please continue this story

Excellent story and a fine job of writing erotica. Please continue!

Please whatever u do, keep going. His culmination with his mother will be epic.

Please continue! Your fans need this story to go on and on and on and on.

Please continue!

Hope you finish it!

Cant wait please hurry up

05/31 2017

Lots of time to wait

Awesome

I'm loving this story. Well done. I've been eagerly waiting for the next chapter; any chance we may get to read it soon?

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3 month we waiting for next chapter

When well we get more? I think about this story often, still anxious to read more...

This story is amazing! When are you releasing more chapters?

I'm waiting for chapter 6!

Like many others here, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I'm really loving this series!

I really like this story but I am waiting for the next chapter

I really like this story . I am waiting for the next chapter to long .

Please Im not only how waintig.

The chapters keep getting better and better. I love how long this is taking. So sexy and drawn out. Fantastic job!

Appreciate your work. Anxiously waiting, but im sure your already scheming another captivating tale. So take your time because effort clearly makes for a wonderful delivery. Thank you.

I love this story. Im cum again.

We vait for next chapter.

Porn production made film.

They made movie based on this story.

Getaway 5 Missax

Its so similar

Anyone willing to write the next stage as this author has gone awol?

Seriously? It's only been three months since the author's last posting and you've declared him awol? Have some patience. Good things come to those who wait.

LOL. I am not AWOL. I haven't abandoned the story, but life gets in the way, as do creative dry patches. The next chapter is nearly done, and it won't be much longer until it is published. I am very appreciative of the fact that people liked the other stories enough that they are eager to read more of the series, and I am trying my best to keep it moving. There will be three more chapters, and the series will conclude before the end of November.

Only three more chapters??? Noooo, plz keep it going as long as you can with alot of chapters to come.

Anonymous, I appreciate the support! But I've planned all along for this to be an 8 chapter story with a definitive end. Each chapter has a pattern and also propels the story toward a conclusion, and I can't sustain that indefinitely. I also have many other story ideas to explore. If I think I can make it work it's possible that I may come back later and start a new series with the same characters, but I don't know for sure.

The draft of Chapter 6 is done, and I'm editing and revising it. It won't be much longer.

Take the time.

First five chapters of the story are great, my congratulations.

we expect the next chapter to be equally good.

the building of the action, the constant tensions between passion and bounds is something the best on this site.

we expect to see first bloojob then dry hamping, anal chapter and ultimately the big sex.

The fact is that this is one of the best stories here. proof of this is the video that the production missax was made video vith similar storiline.

this video is incredibly similar to this story.

Maybe footjob in pantyhose.

Keep going with this series....it is such a turn on to see a mom and son telling each other their dirty thoughts.....have him show her off to others in public like the dad did... except dont let the son get jealous.

how great a story.

I read it ten times.

every time I enjoyed it.

Wonderful story with Son and Mom getting used to each other and heading for the next adventure which they both want. This could progress into a full fledged book, it's really that good. Excellent love story that you could develop it into a permanent mom/son hot sexy relationship. Keep this story going, please.

encouragement of her son. One of those rate long build-up stories that doesn't drag or become a bore. Plan to keep reading and hope the son gets what he deserves.

To remember, "no hands"...

Either she changed the boundary or she never understood it to include he couldn't go down on her... nudge nudge wink wink know what I mean...?

What else can I say?

Both the running scene and shower scene were very erotic. Beautiful story. 5*. -dave

He is so good at steadily increasing his control that she hardly notices it. If she looked back over the last few days she might be shocked and resist but right now she is his to do with as he pleases.

Pussies NEED HAIR, just like a beautiful picture needs a frame to draw the eyes to the picture itself. For many other reasons, too:

The enhancing tresses assure me that I'm fucking a WOMAN, not what looks like a prepubescent teen.

If she is properly stimulated, her juices are absorbed and contained, giving the tongue the most flavor to savor.

I love to kiss, and lick down a treasure trail, lightly pulling her hairs with my lips, giving her more stimulation and anticipation as I near her treasure and the delicious juice awaiting MY enjoyment as I give her enjoyment.

Each woman has her own unique appearance which is created, primarily, by the color, density, and expanse of her curls, but a shaved cunt is just meh.

I've heard some guys say they don't like her hair in their mouth. A minor inconvenience, when weighed against the many pluses. Besides, regular brushing reduces the number of stray strands to a minimum.

This was a great chapter, with very fine detailed imagery. The give and take between the two are so well done. He is constantly pushing the envelope and I fear he will go too far too quickly and she will start to have second thoughts about what they are doing.

Awesome chapter. And very, very few typos make it easier to read.

I wish I was the fictional son. His mother is teaching him how to be the perfect lover. Through his love and respect, the son is showing his mother that a mature man can understand a woman's sensual and sexual needs, which are often different from a man's point of view. The erotic and almost spiritual passion between mother and son wonderful. Truly a 5 star series, so far.

Thjs story is somewhat drawn out, but is progressing beautifully!

Dang this gets better with each chapter.

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My mother had the most amazing beef curtains. They were very meaty, & although she was very fair skinned, her lips were the colour of roast beef. I'm getting hard now just remembering them

Remind me of something that happened between me and my daughter in a shower once can't wait to see what happens