All Comments on 'Like Mother Like Daughter!'

Can you not make this just about your fantasy?

This is a new one for me. I have never heard it referred to as a nozzle.

It's called by many names. It's the opening at the end of a penis from which liquids come. Nozzle is as good a name as any and everyone (I guess) knows what it means.

It was pretty good up until the end. Like a cheesy movie ending where everything turns out ok for the protagonist and his rivals suddenly have the worst luck. I'd say take it easy on the "revenge fantasy" and just stick to crazy sex happening with hot women. We all know it's fiction, but make it believable.

I've noted how readers didn't like the ending. Too bad. I like to write stories not just accounts of sex. I'll limit the extras in future!

To the commenter who asked "Can you not make this just about your fantasy?": Ummm ... why? That's what fiction writers do: make up stories and write them down. All fiction, therefore, is by definition the author's fantasy. Can authors choose to write stories about something other than what they like? Sure, but if you're writing erotica, why not write about what gets you off? I certainly would.