When I first started reading chapter one of this story I expected to find the same uncle/niece pairing you will find splashed over this site but this one has captured my attention.
I appreciate that with this chapter we have new insights into Gerre but have yet to learn just why his sister would entrust him to care for her daughter. I enjoy the way you have described Darlene's discovering her sexuality and making it truly believeable.
I will look forward to reading new chapters of this and I can only hope you don't keep us waiting too long.
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Anonymous08/12/04
Eager for more!
I'm finding this story very interesting and I have to agree with the first reader about this one being intriguing. I'm looking forward to learning more about Uncle Gerre and his niece Darlene. Hope we don't have to wait too long.
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I have to admit I'm intrigued.
When I first started reading chapter one of this story I expected to find the same uncle/niece pairing you will find splashed over this site but this one has captured my attention.
I appreciate that with this chapter we have new insights into Gerre but have yet to learn just why his sister would entrust him to care for her daughter. I enjoy the way you have described Darlene's discovering her sexuality and making it truly believeable.
I will look forward to reading new chapters of this and I can only hope you don't keep us waiting too long.
Eager for more!
I'm finding this story very interesting and I have to agree with the first reader about this one being intriguing. I'm looking forward to learning more about Uncle Gerre and his niece Darlene. Hope we don't have to wait too long.
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