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STC Inhumanity

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by tungtied2u08/07/04

And so it begins,

in small minds, in dark alleyways, until enough gather together that they can hide their faces among the crowd. Thank you for shining a light.

*therm off

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by tarablackwood2208/07/04

I think....

...you did as much justice to Kitty as words could possibly do. I read all the inhumaity poems before commenting on any, and I am so pleasantly surprised to see so many poets choose singular incidents -- the story of Kitty Genovese, the effects of Nothern Ireland on one man alone, the gang fight no one has ever read or heard about -- rather than H bombs. I enjoyed this poem, words of the saturated evils of the indifference of every day people, very much.

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by tarablackwood2208/07/04

I think....

...you did as much justice to Kitty as words could possibly do. I read all the inhumaity poems before commenting on any, and I am so pleasantly surprised to see so many poets choose singular incidents -- the story of Kitty Genovese, the effects of Nothern Ireland on one man alone, the gang fight no one has ever read or heard about -- rather than H bombs. I enjoyed this poem, words of the saturated evils of the indifference of every day people, very much.

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by Tathagata08/07/04

I remember

reading about this.
the indifference was as horrible as the crime.
Thank you for making me remember

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by BlueskyBeauty08/07/04

you did her justice

i think this was wonderful!

i think this one placed me there, it gave her a face, it could have been my friend, my neighbor, my sister, or even me.

what a sad thing indifference is..and it only breeds more indifference.

very nicely done! ty

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by champagne198208/08/04

justice

is served in the guilt and horror of the realization that they let this happen.

Inhumanity or woefully human?

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by BooMerengue08/08/04

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Wow, Deep! Why were you afraid to write this? You did a terriffic job! Thanks, so much for this!

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You did

... a great job!!

I loved the flow of this one. The peeping tom's... 'someone else will call...'

Loved it. ;-)

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by 08/10/04

A strong poem,..

.....a terribly sad story. I looked this up to find the news coverage. It was international news but then, it is an international flaw - a human flaw. I don't use the thermometer

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