All Comments on 'Brenda's Affair'

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johntcookseyjohntcookseyalmost 7 years ago
Nice opening

Although I know this can stand alone, I'd love to hear more about Brenda. Nice, clean writing - good sympathetic characters. ***** Thanks.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitalmost 7 years ago
Not bad

Why bother sending him out the back? She drank all night, suspects he's been cheating, and sounds like she doesn't care - up to hearing the car. I'd say she wanted the confrontation and wanted to give hubby shit over neglecting her.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 7 years ago
Loved the last two lines

The last two lines alone made the entire story worth reading, at least for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

That should be the spur to for her to sort her life out, hopefully there's another chapter to read how.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Close call

Great story....hope you have more to follow! Love to hear more of the budding infidelity that Brenda is entering. Good for her!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

GOOD for Brenda. Every married woman deserves fun outside of their marriage. Please....keep writing.

SensuousmindSensuousmind12 months ago

Excellent story! It had me moist and thinking of some of my own escapades similar to this. Unplanned always adds to the enjoyment. 5 stars

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