by SarahShowsOff
Your doing better but you definately need to make your stories longer and actually get into the story!!! Quit teasing already girl....Damn!! LMAO :-P
So much potential and thought in the storyline, if you could just detail it a little more,as others have said. Enjoy yourself!
You have to have more of this story! You need to make your stories longer and more detailed. Get into a little sex and describe it all.
Great second chapter! Great turn on! Just wish our society was more into this! But we are all such pruds that it is sickening! No matter what we could learn allot from our European friends!
Great stories & IF you really do like showing off, why not post a photo in your Bio?
I love showing my body off, see my story to see where it led...
Regards
Emma
This is a nice start but I agree with others, they need to be longer and let's get into sex with one or all of the others.
Great Stories; added them to favourites. But where are the sequels? More, More, More ! (please...)
fantastic story, just wish more happened with the family. hope the men get naked too next day at the pool!