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this sounds ..
like a novel.
quite the story told here.
great images mutt, and it flowed like a slow dance.
i enjoyed this! xx
I "like" it.
Lots of strong imagery and fresh similes. - My only question is if it would be better to chop a few "likes"? For some reason they halt the reading flow for me. Could you metamorph to metaphor some similes? ;)
This shows
a lot of depth and range.
Nice stuff.
You're getting a lot stronger in your writing
Thank you
what you have here
seems to me like a very engaging, colorful tale, I would love to read it expanded upon, if you ever decide to do so, Maggie seems full of fire and destined for greatness ;)
Love it!!
Really well worded to strike clear images.
Great job, Mutt!! ;-)
*pulling up a chair*
so much of Maggie is solid and clear and mysterious in my mind...you are a story teller Mutt my sweets and shine through your poetry. Please write more in this vein.
good storytelling...
I especially like this phrase...
"hard as the face she showed strangers."
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Yet another tragic figure you portray here — a sad figure tossed aside by humanity, desperately trying to remain connected.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.
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A folk tale was born!
Thank you LeBroz for reintroducing this poetic tale and thanks to JeniferMidmight (with a little Irish blood)for somehow describing in 2004 exactly what crossed my mind today :)
But thanks most to the poet who put together such a poem to marvel upon!
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