All Comments on 'Tara Quinn Ch. 02: Quinn Takes the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

This is a great story! Maybe your later stories could be a bit longer, but this is still good!

dongstardongstaralmost 7 years ago
Moar!

A great concept but I definitely want more detail. As it is I feel like I barely had time to get into the story before it was over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
knocked up

and shes pregnant heheeh

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Details!

Definitely could use some more details when it gets into the thick of things (pun intended). Looking forward to your future stories :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Love the way the story is going. However I would enjoy it a lot more if you added more detail to the story as a whole.

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