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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/09/04

Expressionism

Wonderful use of color, DA. I'm not sure I got the anguish you feel for its misuse in the second stanza, though.

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by irishcatsmeow08/09/04

A haunting poem...

Wonderful description of emotions that are right on the surface but yet remain buried.

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by Tathagata08/09/04

Heavy

haunting and beautiful.

Thank you for sharing this

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