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Prodigal, Prodigal

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by Anonymous

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by flyguy6908/09/04

You are making your mark

It may not always be pretty, but is that so desireable? Another great offering, DA!

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by Tathagata08/09/04

Lot of this

I can relate to.
I still say your a beat poet reborn.

~There's love in the world, though
Truth and beauty.
Personal responsibility.~

Wonderful stanza


~You can't eat shit like that.
They do make it easier not to feel
such a waste of po-fucking-tential.~

Po-fucking-tential is priceless

Great job
This looks like one long rant but i can tell some editing went into it.
Thank you

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