All Comments on 'Michele's Dark Destiny Ch. 01'

Hopefully we won't have to wait six months to see what happens! Very good beginning, well written and hot as hell! Thanks for your hard work!

My wife and I started the same way and after a few years we made the fantasy real with a dear black friend and it was even better than the fantasy,

Please continue this HOT story.

Please continue!

It is a hot story but for me only as a fantasy. I couldn't deal with cheating and all the lies that follow. I'm also not a racist but I don't agree with all the stories of the giant black guy with the massive dick . In my experience in school and gyms over decades where guys will walk around naked , most men are around the same with maybe 5% that are over sized and huge. It's not a black think just a percentage thing. Porn finds the biggest dicks they can so it's a bad judge. Letting a bigger dicked guy fuck your wife who fantasy it's is is a disaster. Also a friend who is not black with a massive huge dick say sometimes it's a curse. Girls are amazed by it but then they can't take it or are afraid it's gonna tear them so it takes the enjoyment out of it . He fucked this 57 year old married woman who wanted it but was afraid. She screamed like he was killing her he said but after he got it in he pummeled her ever taking her ass after the third time they hooked up. He's been fucking her for two years as her marriage falls apart but she is the rare desperate for his giant dick that he has encountered

Congrats for this excellent start!!!! Please, go on ;-)

Love this start to what I know will be a really hot, wet story. Xoxoxoxox Annette

Very well written and erotic. I look forward to reading about the consummation!

Can hardly wait for part 2

What will follow, if the author is realistic, is animosity and then divorce. The inadequate "man" will wonder where his balls, courage and integrity went. DUMB FUCK SHIT.

The author did a very poor job on this story. It seems the author has some gay issues mixed with cuckold issues that were transported to this bad story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

A great str, make sure to write the rest!

Please ignore "What Ugly Trash" comment abive! It says you can't write and yet that person cannot form a grammatical sentence or coherent thought. says your story is not hot and yet in three days you have 50 faves! Your story is quite hot...extremely in fact...but maybe too intense for some. I love your stories and it looks like many others share that. Don't change because somebody can't handle the intensity of the emotions and eroticism you express...

I'm hoping you make the six month process very long and very teasing, since your writing is very descriptive and sensual.

Maybe it's just me but I'm feeling like Michele is at the good good stage and she needs to be properly made into a slut before the natural consummation. Maybe it's fake breasts or piercings but that's all up to your imagination.

Top tier story.

I'm really pissed that people can so so ignorant, disrespectful of another's wonderful

work, and just downright cowardly assholes hiding behind "anonymous".

Erica don't let the bastards get you down they have no idea what the hell they're talking about. Your work is a cut

above 90% of the stories posted on Literotica. You've got a fan here.

I know this is a work of fiction, but the protagonist of the story really seems unable to stay away from that slippery slope of taking this from fantasy to reality. Sadly, people really do get caught up in moments and make decisions they'll eventually regret. Infidelity, even that encouraged by a partner, usually ends up in divorce. Fortunately since this is a fantasy story, the protagonist can safely have his cake and eat it too without dealing with the emotional fallout of his actions.

Great story! I look forward to next chapter. I hope it's soon. I'm sure wifey experiencing black cock for real will be even hotter than role-playing it with hubby

This story is fantastic. The plot and character development were spot on plus the flow was just right. I really loved this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

I predict she will end up with a black lover and knocked up. He will be history.

Splendid! I'm glad you've returned.

well written, cannot wait for michele to get a bbc in her pussy!

Extremely erotic and very well written. The focus on the thoughts and emotions made it so much better than the typical stroke story. Can't wait to read more

This story you've posted is incredible! Well done! I loved it. I look forward to Ch. 02!

Thank you so much for sharing such a well written fantasy that seems so closely related to my wife and I. Thank you.

Congrats!!!

Can't wait until she gets fucked good and hard by a real black bull!

Don't leave us in suspense!!

Go on, you write good.

I have become addicted to your stories as I read Sara and Ericas exploits over and over to deeply satisfying climaxes! Then this one ...OMG! I love it! Love it! I have never been with a black guy though you make it so enticing. I got so into Michele's Destiny, ramming myself with a pretty big pink dildo. But it wasn't enough, though it always was before. it didn't live up to your imagery. So I bit the bullett and bought myself a Doc Johnson 10.5 inch black monster! I was scared, like Michelle, but so excited! It looked so hot against my body. While it took time and effort to get it in the sight of it stretching me sent me over the edge! And seeing my pale bush sticking to it! OMG. I creamed so hard! So intense. Best O of my 27 years. Want the real thing.

You are leaving me hanging. We need the next chapter.

Good stuff!

Good story. Is it dead though?

I have never been so turned on in my entire life. You took me on a ride with this one, an erotic, sensual ride. My pussy was throbbing the entire time wishing I was Michele. I almost came without even touching myself, then when I finally did...I squirted like three times. Please don't ever stop writing your stories! (page is book marked so I can come back to it.)

As I read I was pulled into the story in such a way that I was HER. I was BEING fucked by a huge, black phallus as I read. I was so wet and dripping cream... no lube needed as I masturbated with my big, thick, black dildo as I read.

I only made it as far as his seed spilling inside her before I came HARD and LOUD. My pussy was spasming so hard as I came that it's still inside me as I type this comment... I can't pull it out yet, lol. I came too hard and need to wait until my pussy relaxes a bit... SO HOT! I want that superior black seed inside my wet pussy!

I love how detailed your writing is. I love how wet I got reading this story, now I have to read some of your other stories.

This is so good and you need to finish the series. I know there was an original chapter 2, please up date and refresh it and then lead us to chapters 3 and possible 4. You are a good writer and this is a hot story - no matter what the annonymous haters blather about!

This story was so insightful. The feelings where spot on. I can't wait to read the next one.

Saved your first copies of this to my computer and they are among my most favorite stories. Your 2nd version of the first half is so much better than the original, when oh when will you publish the revised 2nd half of this story. Please don't make us wait any longer!

This is a great well structured and very erotic story.

I hope that you are able to continue.

Thanks

Enjoyed how she admitted her love for black cock

I love the way he makes her claim her thoughts. Makes her admit her taboo thoughts. Although I would have loved to have a real black cock, I have a feeling that will come in chapters to follow. I look forward to reading more!

Sexy story and so hot and could be just how it really happens . Now , lets have the rest of the story . Please don't turn him into some kind of wimp .

I came so much reading this, I couldn't stop. I wish I could have a husband who understands and a big black cock to breed me.

finish this sexy tale !!!!!!

unfinished great tale...please finish what you have started.

So it seems like this is a dead story. Very disappointing because I liked it a lot. A few comments have mentioned earlier versions of the story. Is there anywhere they can be found? Like on another site or something.

I have scene so many great stories left unfinhed on Lit, a couple 30 chapters long!

What’s up with that?

Anyway my reaction to this story is how can any smart man fuck his wife with a Hugh dildo and then expect her to be satisfied with his cock. Makes for a great story but man are these guys deluded lol.

I love the feel of a dominant black man with a huge BBC. This storyline turned me on that I soaked my sheets. I love how the husband wanted his wife to have exactly what she was craving. I need more now.

Great beginning and great setting with this couple. It would be a shame if you ended it here. But I must admit it is not easy to set things up very well for a discriminating, intelligent and beautiful professional with a PhD without slutting things up with just any black man. It is also not easy deciding whether the culminating event is just a one-off encounter that satisfies her curiosity regarding a real black man or whether you lead them to meet a refined one of their ilk that could lead to a continuing affair driven by her need to explore the heights of her carnal desires. Good luck! But it is time to write about what happened six months later - you clearly had something in mind.

Another great story and hope you continue on with this story line

Erica .great story. I would trade my vanilla life to go black. Husband is ushering her desires while maintaining control. Can't wait to read Chapter two. Gifted writing.

This is incredibly hot and erotic. It made me very wet and I didn’t last to the end! I came hard as soon as Michele began to verbalize her love for black cock. 5 stars!

I really love this story! I love all your stories. I like how they are so realistic - I know people exactly like Michele and Ty! I like that she is classy, sexually conservative and not some oversexed slut. I like how her demeanor changed when she saw black cock and how she felt shame and the need to apologize after being so aroused by it. It seems like Michele’s “rough day” was caused by obsessive thoughts and images lingering from the previous night. I like how she struggled to regain control, before quickly giving in to the temptation to see more. It’s just awesome and wonderfully erotic!

What a wonderful story I love that ending. So many people don't communicate properly and so there love lives become stale. Communication openness and experimentation are vital to a healthy relationship and evolving sexuality.

If two people love each other and as long as no one gets hurt then nothing should be off limits to try or talk about. Especially incorporating fantasy verbally while making love can help Explorer kinks. I hope I read many more of your stories

Wow, this story made me wish I Michele. I surrendered to this fantasy and I was Michele. I read it as I imagine being in her shoes and I let myself cum when she did.

Now i feel like i wanna try the same))

Mila

mmm...so freaking good...love the question at the end "do you want to try a real Black Man"...of course she does, it only takes a second to realize how much more superior lovers they make. White males should take note of the husbands support and subsequent actions at his realization that his wife needed more than he could provide (they all need more than we can provide fellas) and then took the appropriate steps to remedy this - we should all be this husband and give our Queens the Black Cock they need and desire.

Great start

Wow! I absolutely loved every word. I felt like it was me tied to that bed, accepting that huge black dildo into my mouth and eager pussy!

Very well written even though I am not a fan of the IR genre. I guess sadly it’s becoming more and more common and mainstream ☹️😣

Let me say first I Never been married to none the Mens I had kids with. And I been with Way MORE Black Men then any other type Mens. But yeah I been with white and Spanish and even some Indian and Pakistani Mens and some was from Africa and Liberia and Ghana and Nigeria even.

Anyways there was a Few Mens I Trusted or Let Tie me UP and Down for there or some the Mens that was IN the room or at the Party to have SEX with me. I always been submissive but theres something about when a Man tied my hands behind my back or a couple of Mens held my Arms and Legs apart for another Man to take his turn between them was just so Crazy GOOD.

I cant wait to see where Michele goes or how far like I done with some the Mens I Trusted or when I just got To Smoked up and High or Drunk a bit or Both to care but was SOooo Horny I wanted IT like Michele did with the Black Dildo and OH Yeah I do got alot of Pics of me with my Favorite Toys and Battery Operated Boyfriends I call B.O.B lol

Super story!!!

Good story. It wasn't until I was 36 that BBC became a reality while on a business trip. There have been five other black men since then, mostly good hard fucks but one became scary and painful but I think any man could turn on the pain.

My wife found your story and we both enjoyed it tremendously. It was very hot, well-written and quite plausible. Whenever she finds a story about a white wife going black, her eyes light up with excitement.

We both like your story’s heavy emphasis on black breeding, i.e. several of Michele’s college girlfriends gave birth to black babies after trysts with black jocks. Also, by the end of the story Michele’s main fantasy was ‘a black man’s seed’ which was very hot.

My wife especially likes stories where the husband acts as the ‘enabler’ who ‘empowers’ his own wife to try black cock. That was my role as my wife started enjoying black cock.

She says that some husbands are more in synch with the natural world and how Mother Nature intended animals to breed. Thus, they instinctively either move out of the way for the Alpha breeder or they push their wife into the arms of the Alpha male.

Your story was the perfect example of the second approach as hubby used porn, a black dildo and role play to ‘indoctrinate’ Michele. Now, she will be ‘inducted’ into the world of black cock which is exactly what all white wives need – according to my wife!

Once I got my wife to that place, mentally and emotionally, the black guys just started hitting on her. They just seemed to know that my wife would be a willing receptacle for their huge cocks. Then, a few months later she actually went black. She says this is the natural order of things and highly recommends it to other white wives!

Great “Dark Destiny’ story!

Nice hot story, I love black cock also, discovered it on a trip to Disney!

Never heard a story on the news about a wife abandoning her husband for her dildo it would be awesome if michelle did that

Sadly, i have never even met a black man, let alone seen or had sex with a bbc, so its a fetish i have, when i watch porn, its almost always watching bbc. having sex with slim women like me. loved the hot story 5*

good story. Hot. Nothing wrong in a happy healthy good marriage with being your wife's cuckold husband. nothing better than a happy well fucked wife. what the fuck is wrong with everyone nowadays she is your wife and has needs . Having a well fucked wife enhances your marriage. My wife enjoyed bbc and most wives really enjoy bbc. an[d my wife was no exception as she really enjoyed bbc

Nice story, the breeding aside, I found it hot. After college, we got married and three years later we moved to London for his job, there I had a three month affair. We met at a bar, drinks, a hour plus quickly flew by. He was very dark, tall too, a businessman from the Congo, twelve years older than me, educated, obviously had some money and I was infatuated with him. Soon we met every other week, part of me wanted him badly because he was black, part because he was interesting, but I resisted my urges, hell I was married. Three months later, it began, I needed to have him fuck me, hubby was on trip, I suggested we take a walk. I was very nervous, walked around my block twice, I fumbled with the keys as we headed up to my flat, we entered and I took his hand and lead him to our bedroom. I wanted my first black lover to take my white pussy in my home, in my bed. I watched as held his very black cock at my entrance, it was wide, it may have been a second but it seems longer before he sank it deep into me, he kept on until he balls deep, damn did it feel wonderfully filling. He was great in bed, experienced, he fucked me very slowly before pushing my legs all the way back and violently assaulting my pussy, I was moaning and crying, being split open, held him tightly as he cock pulsed his cum into me. Hours later we were spent. At ten o'clock, my phone buzzed, it was my hubby, as we spoke, my new found lover quietly dressed, I waved him over for a kiss but instead I watched as inserted a long black middle finger into my pussy making it difficult for me to continuing speaking, I cut the call short saying I'd call him back tomorrow morning. He pushed a second finger into me pushing against my G spot, I pushed down on his hand holding it there as I bucked against them. I came hard, the teasing ended, he left, kissed me and smiled. My pussy ached from his hard finger fucking, my clit was hyper sensitive. My only secret, but it was a dark secret.